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The most innovative event in human history is the discovery of electricity
The first person to find electricity is Thales
Today we are always living with electricity. 27
Electricity is so important that we can not live without this
I also use electricity for 24 hours
It is not just me, it is everyone
This innovation brings about the great development of humanity, such as the invention of light bulbs
If it were not for electricity, we would not be able to do everything we do now
Electricity is important
It does many things, such as allowing us to see bright light at night, move machines, and use electronic devices
What is the symbolic meaning of this innovation?
I think it means one of the many footprints that has made humanity progress
Human technology will continue to develop steadily
I am looking forward to developing skills
Thank you for reading my long post
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훌륭한 글을 써주셨네요! 몇 가지 작은 수정 사항이 있습니다:
1. "The first person to find electricity is Thales"에서 "find" 대신 "discover"를 사용하는 것이 더 적절합니다. 따라서 문장은 "The first person to discover electricity is Thales"가 되겠습니다.
2. "Today we are always living with electricity. 27"에서 "27"은 불필요한 부분으로 보입니다. 이 부분을 삭제하시면 "Today we are always living with electricity"라는 문장이 완성됩니다.
3. "Electricity is so important that we can not live without this"에서 "this" 대신 "it"을 사용하는 것이 자연스러운 표현입니다. 따라서 문장은 "Electricity is so important that we cannot live without it"이 됩니다.
4. "I also use electricity for 24 hours"에서 "for" 대신 "24 hours a day"를 사용하면 더 자연스러운 표현이 됩니다. 따라서 문장은 "I also use electricity 24 hours a day"가 됩니다.
5. "It does many things, such as allowing us to see bright light at night, move machines, and use electronic devices"에서 "move machines"를 "operate machines"로 변경하면 더 적합한 표현이 됩니다. 따라서 문장은 "It does many things, such as allowing us to see bright light at night, operate machines, and use electronic devices"가 됩니다.