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The reason why kpop represents korea.
There are many things
1.kpop catches the eye of foreigners through fantastic performances.
2.consisting of addictive by the audience.
3. High quality music utilizing various visual elements.
4.communicate with fans such as social media or fan meeting.
5.The activities of the kpop industry have a positive effect on revitalizing the domestic economy,such as linking the export of korean wave-related contents and expanding the tourism demand of foreigners
6.It draws foreigners attention with its satirical and pleasant lyrics for this reason kpop is also popular with foreigners and has become one of the representatives of korea



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The reasons why K-pop represents Korea

1.It catches the eye of foreigners through fantastic performances.

2. It consisting of various elements addictive to the audience.

3. Its high quality music utilizes various visual elements.

4. Its artists communicate with fans through as social media or fan meetings.

5.The activities of the K-pop industry have a positive effect on revitalizing the domestic economy, such as linking the export of korean wave-related contents and expanding the tourism demand of foreigners.

6.It draws foreigners' attention with its satirical and pleasant lyrics.

For these reasons, K-pop is popular with foreigners and has become one of the representative cultures of Korea.

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