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1. "I was always in a stark atmosphere where I shouldn't show my emotions." -> "I was always in a stark atmosphere where I shouldn't have shown my emotions."

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2. "I was dragged without a leash according to strict standards." -> "I was constrained by strict standards without any freedom."

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3. "The control from my superiors was so severe that I had to act like an emotionless person." -> "The control exerted by my superiors was so severe that I had to pretend to be emotionless."

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4. "When I think back to that time, I was a seemingly emotionless corpse." -> "Looking back at that time, I appeared like an emotionless corpse."

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5. "When the subject of life changed to me, I felt liberated and could breathe freely." -> "When life's focus shifted to myself, I felt liberated and could breathe freely."

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6. "And then I realized." -> "It was then that I realized."

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7. "I was too young at the time and there was nothing I could do. You don't have to blame me." -> "I was too young at the time, and there was nothing I could do. There's no need to blame me."

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8. "Someone said love is like home." -> "Someone once said that love is like a home."

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9. "To find out whether you like it or not, you have to take a chance and try it." -> "To determine whether you like it or not, you must take a chance and experience it."

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10. "That's the house I'm going to live in." -> "That's the home I intend to reside in."

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