목관대랑 5형식 문장 다 있는지 봐주세요ㅠㅠ 그리고 문장에서 틀린부분 있나요??ㅠㅠ
The problems that occur when you sleep late are difficult to get up early in the first morning. Second, you feel a lot of fatigue.
Lastly, your sleep pattern gets worse and there are problems with your health.
In order to solve these problems, Changing my sleep patterns is the way. If you set the time to sleep and set the time to get up, it's comfortable when you wake up. And if you set the pattern of going to bed early, you will reduce fatigue and it will be good for your health. Let's all make healthy and good lifestyle habits.
안녕하세요 질문자님?
전체적으로 문장이 잘 구성되어 있지만 몇 가지 수정이 필요합니다. 아래는 수정된 버전입니다:
"Hello, let's talk about a problem in my lifestyle. My issue is staying up late.
The problems that arise from staying up late are difficulty waking up early in the morning and feeling excessive fatigue. Furthermore, it can disrupt your sleep pattern and negatively impact your health.
To address these issues, changing my sleep routine is the solution. If you establish a consistent bedtime and wake-up time, it will be more comfortable to wake up. Additionally, adopting an early bedtime pattern can help reduce fatigue and improve your overall health. Let's all strive to develop healthy and positive lifestyle habits."
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