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There were two main characters, Carter and Edward, who were judged to be time-limited at the hospital. Carter had a dream but didn't have the money to do it, and Edward had the money but didn't have a dream. They were feeling the boredom of life. The two meet at the hospital and find fun in life by filling each other's vacancies. In this part, I felt, "Even if life continues to be boring, one day having a chance to turn boredom into interest is me who misses and regrets my life, even if I am tired of boredom." 로 수정하셔요.

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중복된 주어 생략 안함, 부정 관사 실수, 대문자로 문장 시작 안함...등의 사소한 실수들이 있습니다.