여기에 복합관계대명사랑 가목적어 it이 들어가 있나요?
I walked around the Airbase and picked up whatever I saw.
Sometimes, I walked into the Osan Airbase and Picked up the trash with them.
I was inspired to do this activity because I wanted to know how to talk with foreigners. I didn't have an opportunity to talk with them.
When I heard there was an activity where I could talk with foreigners, I volunteered as soon as possible.
While volunteering, I found it easy to talk with foreigners.
Thanks to this activity, I can be more confident when talking with foreigners.
그리고 시간이 되신다면 문법적으로 어색하거나 틀린부분도 고쳐주시면 감사하겠습니다.
* 간단한 것은 빨강색으로~, 설명이 필요하면 하단에 설명할게요.
I picked up the trash with friends and foreigners at the Osan Airbase.
I walked around the Airbase and picked up whatever I saw.(복합관계대명사)
Sometimes, I walked into the Osan Airbase and picked up the trash with them.
I was inspired to do this activity because I wanted to know>learn이 나음 how to talk with foreigners in English(추가하면 좋을 듯). I didn't have an>any(부정문에서 쓰면 좋음) opportunity to talk with them.
Whenever(가 딱들어갈 자리임) I heard there was some activity where I could talk with foreigners, I volunteered as soon as possible.
While volunteering, I found it easy to talk with foreigners.(가목적어 it사용함)
Thanks to this activity, I 1.can be more confident when talking with foreigners.
*전체적으로 안정감있게 쓰셨네요 1.I can have more confidence 가 더 낫지 않을까요?
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