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when I was young, I prepared for my mom's birthday with my sister. My sister and I saved money and bought a birthday present. we also bought a cake that my mom likes. when I prepared, I expected a reaction from my mother. first, we gave her a cake. Then we gave a present to her and she was very surprised. We ate the cake together that evening. I was so proud that I laughed with my sister.

특별한 경험 말하기구요 한 문장에 단어 5개 이상, 8문장 이상이구 I was so ~ that 써야해요!! 문장이 외우기 어려우면 조금 더 쉽게 바꿔주셔도 되고 틀린거 없는지 봐주세요


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