영어 자기소개 문법 맞나 확인해주세요
Although I cannot speak English well, let me introduce myself.
My weakness is that I'm quiet and shy, and my strength is that I keep my time and I'm diligent
Since I was young, I felt rewarded and happy to help others. I applied here because I thought helping others was a good fit to do with my tendency
Although I don't have much social experience, if I can work here, I will work hard and be helpful to the members here with passion and effort that will not be beaten by anyone.
일상회화식으로 고칠거 있으면 고쳐주세요ㅠㅠㅠ
My weakness is that I'm quiet and shy, and my strength is that I keep my time and I'm diligent
Since I was young, I felt rewarded and happy to help others. I applied here because I thought helping others was a good fit to do with my tendency
Although I don't have much social experience, if I can work here, I will work hard and be helpful to the members here with passion and effort that will not be beaten by anyone.
일상회화식으로 고칠거 있으면 고쳐주세요ㅠㅠㅠ
✔️✔️✔️최고의 답변✔️✔️✔️
"Even though my English isn't very strong, I'd like to introduce myself. One of my weaknesses is that I tend to be quiet and shy, but one of my strengths is that I am punctual and diligent. Since I was young, I've found great satisfaction in helping others, which is why I applied for this position. While I may not have extensive social experience, if given the opportunity to work here, I am committed to putting in the effort and passion needed to be a valuable and dedicated team member."
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