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Even though many drivers claim that they can use a cellphone safely while behind the wheel, but the effects of using a cellphone while driving, even a hands-free device, can clearly be seen. Researchers have found that the affect is similar to driving under the influence of alcohol, however, talking to a passenger or listening to the radio does not seem to have the same effects. Talking on a phone takes attention away from the road. Even when the driver has both eyes on the road; and both hands on the wheel. This often results in various hazards. For example, the driver slowing down or weaving. Most important, cellphone users are prone to “unintentional blindness,” people do not properly process what they are seeing. This effect has been amply shown in tests. Like the gorilla test in which observers fail to see something in the picture when their concentrating on something else. Because drivers must quickly process many things that they see on the road. Its easy to understand the implications of this test for drivers. The human brain is capable of incredible thought processes however, research seems to suggest it still cannot effectively muti-task, therefore, laws prohibiting cellphone use while driving should include hands-free devices. Which could save lives. The next challenge, enforcing these laws!


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Even though many drivers claim that they can use a cellphone safely while behind the wheel, but the effects of using a cellphone while driving, even a hands-free device, can clearly be seen. Researchers have found that the affect (effect) is similar to driving under the influence of alcohol. However, however, talking to a passenger or listening to the radio does not seem to have the same effects. Talking on a phone takes attention away from the road. Even when the driver has both eyes on the road (; 없애야 합니다) and both hands on the wheel. This often results in various hazards. For example, (when) the driver (is) slowing down or weaving. Most important(ly), cellphone users are prone to “unintentional blindness,” (where) people do not properly process what they are seeing. This effect has been amply shown in tests. Like the gorilla test ,가 필요합니다 in which observers fail to see something in the picture when their (they're) concentrating on something else. Because drivers must quickly process many things that they see on the road. Its road, it's easy to understand the implications of this test for drivers. The human brain is capable of incredible thought processes . However, however, research seems to suggest it still cannot effectively muti-task, therefore, . Therefore, laws prohibiting cellphone use while driving should include hands-free devices. Which , which could save lives. The next challenge, (is) enforcing these laws!

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